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cloes up print advert

This is frustrating I have tried to up load his image 6 times today I guess it should never be see one more time and then I will try tomorrow.

cloes up print advert
kimanigeorge's picture
kimanigeorge
Activity Score 60

This is frustrating I have tried to up load his image 6 times today I guess it should never be see one more time and then I will try tomorrow.

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• ω •
Activity Score 243

yes yes, u got it right this time:) bravo for not giving up!

i think iz a nice n subtle idea (if someone dun come along n say iz been done..)..but i can't tell if those on the pen suppose to be chew-marks or fancy designs..

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Stigset
Activity Score 1454

Congratulations for a successfull upload !! I like this a lot ! and I don't agree with • ω • I clearly see that it's chew marks. hope it hasn't been done before.

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Davosk
Activity Score 4815

Congratulations, you did it. I like the idea but the chew marks look to me as if their convex not concave.
In other words, it looks like the metal has bubbled outward not inward.

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alexpoeima
Activity Score 41

They dont look like chew marks... it looks gross... or
can it give the impression toothpaste can do that to your teeth???
nop... not for me.

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kimanigeorge
Activity Score 60

Gross or not if you chew on your writing pencil you would leave your teeth marks,
A focus on the idea would be better and weather it’s strong enough to get the message across to the consumer (superior oral care for stronger teeth.)

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daprankster
Activity Score 422

Very clear for me,teeth marks are obvious, nice, could be used everywhere

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Chris
Activity Score 1985

this picture has been done for another product im sure!

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Aref
Activity Score 152

Good idea, i like the idea strait to the point and clear, but i think you can do better for the Art direction, try to do something for the backgroung....it's a funny Ad so try to push more the Art direction.....Good work

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