cloes up print advert

This is frustrating I have tried to up load his image 6 times today I guess it should never be see one more time and then I will try tomorrow.

cloes up print advert

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kimanigeorge's picture
kimanigeorge
60 pencils

This is frustrating I have tried to up load his image 6 times today I guess it should never be see one more time and then I will try tomorrow.

• ω •'s picture
• ω •
243 pencils

yes yes, u got it right this time:) bravo for not giving up!

i think iz a nice n subtle idea (if someone dun come along n say iz been done..)..but i can't tell if those on the pen suppose to be chew-marks or fancy designs..

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

Congratulations for a successfull upload !! I like this a lot ! and I don't agree with • ω • I clearly see that it's chew marks. hope it hasn't been done before.

Davosk's picture
Davosk
4833 pencils

Congratulations, you did it. I like the idea but the chew marks look to me as if their convex not concave.
In other words, it looks like the metal has bubbled outward not inward.

alexpoeima's picture
alexpoeima
41 pencils

They dont look like chew marks... it looks gross... or
can it give the impression toothpaste can do that to your teeth???
nop... not for me.

kimanigeorge's picture
kimanigeorge
60 pencils

Gross or not if you chew on your writing pencil you would leave your teeth marks,
A focus on the idea would be better and weather it’s strong enough to get the message across to the consumer (superior oral care for stronger teeth.)

daprankster's picture
daprankster
422 pencils

Very clear for me,teeth marks are obvious, nice, could be used everywhere

Chris's picture
Chris
1987 pencils

this picture has been done for another product im sure!

Aref's picture
Aref
152 pencils

Good idea, i like the idea strait to the point and clear, but i think you can do better for the Art direction, try to do something for the backgroung....it's a funny Ad so try to push more the Art direction.....Good work

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