Children's overweight

This is not my work guys but i wont you to see it... :)

Children's overweight

11 comments

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

I hope this is spec work as there is a typo. One cannot say "Children's overweight is a growing problem. ..." it would make a lot more sense to say,
"Childhood obesity is a growing problem. ..." or "Overweight children are a growing problem. ..."

GrandChamp's picture
GrandChamp
97 pencils

Try moving your image down and putting the type in the bluw to help it read better. The idea seems kinda forced. Your just shoving this image in our face. Try putting some other swings so we can see that it is a growing problem.

bknowlden's picture
bknowlden
3647 pencils

What's the BBDO in the top right? I have trouble thinking this came from anyone there.
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ALAA's picture
ALAA
439 pencils

I don't know I don't even remember where I get it... :)

ivan's picture
ivan

The idea is ok, but not great. Bit too obvious. The copy is hard to read. I think it would work well in a non advertising professional environment. Average people would appreciate it more than we do. We've seen too many ideas on this level.

Benjamin's picture
Benjamin
10 pencils

Definitely word it differently....Childhood obesity is a growing problem is a great suggestion

Guest's picture
Guest

Overweight children are literally a "growing" problem

Shawali's picture
Shawali
8442 pencils

Did you get your idea (and the picture) from there ?

http://thechive.com/2010/04/26/monday-motivational-posters-29-photos/m...

I knew I'd seen it somewhere...

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

alvinpck's picture
alvinpck
1467 pencils

Read his comment, Shawali.

Shawali's picture
Shawali
8442 pencils

Ooooops, my bad! Sorry. =)

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

Hiperion's picture
Hiperion
3138 pencils

Nothing special here...
too much to improve

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