Children's overweight

This is not my work guys but i wont you to see it... :)

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Activity Score 1475

I hope this is spec work as there is a typo. One cannot say "Children's overweight is a growing problem. ..." it would make a lot more sense to say,
"Childhood obesity is a growing problem. ..." or "Overweight children are a growing problem. ..."

GrandChamp's picture
Activity Score 97

Try moving your image down and putting the type in the bluw to help it read better. The idea seems kinda forced. Your just shoving this image in our face. Try putting some other swings so we can see that it is a growing problem.

bknowlden's picture
Activity Score 3647

What's the BBDO in the top right? I have trouble thinking this came from anyone there.

ALAA's picture
Activity Score 441

I don't know I don't even remember where I get it... :)

ivan's picture

The idea is ok, but not great. Bit too obvious. The copy is hard to read. I think it would work well in a non advertising professional environment. Average people would appreciate it more than we do. We've seen too many ideas on this level.

Benjamin's picture
Activity Score 10

Definitely word it differently....Childhood obesity is a growing problem is a great suggestion

Guest's picture

Overweight children are literally a "growing" problem

Shawali's picture
Activity Score 8442

Did you get your idea (and the picture) from there ?

I knew I'd seen it somewhere...

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!!

alvinpck's picture
Activity Score 1467

Read his comment, Shawali.

Shawali's picture
Activity Score 8442

Ooooops, my bad! Sorry. =)

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!!

Hiperion's picture
Activity Score 3138

Nothing special here...
too much to improve