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Child Labor
Submitted by Siju Nair on Wed, 2007-07-04 06:13.
Advert title(s): Many children get into their father's shoes very early.
Help them get into school shoes instead. Donate generously.
Advertising Agency (Name, City, Country): Triton Communications, Bangalore, India.
Agency website: http://tritoncom.com
Creative Director / Copywriter: Satya P Ranjan
Art Director: Siju S Nair
Photographer: Kumaran
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well done... keep it up..
very good
very good
isn't it too literal? First idea-type? but nice art direction
Mmm, bit too literal.
And where's the info that would actually make this an ad?
Donate to whom? And how?
nice concept & execution keep it up...
This ad lacks a logo. I like the thought, but I think the visual looks very 80's. (just an impression)
i really happy with the concept and the visual
Valiads
nice one.. keep it up..
nice... keep it up... good job..
i like the concept and the visual
good one, different thought, i like it.
Nice.
Nice.
Your line is very good.
Visual looks to be forced. If you can shoot where the child is working upon something, it will be better. Now it looks like he is posing for ad.
Image should have depth. It will go better with the thought.
Font used is so polished and sane. Use bolder and little heavy typefaces even if you are allergic to them.
You don't need to tilt the line also.
Do you have some figure like '5 lac children' or something? Its adds credibility.
The uneven edges are unnecessary.
Final Suggestion: When your idea has weight, keep the layout simple.
Cheers!
Kick ass execution really good work!
ya one more point you dint mention the details of donation to whom and how???
nice concept Kick ass execution
i like it.
really nice.
Copy cud be a little more CRISP.
and yes, who do we donate to?
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Concept is good. Easy to understand the meaning (Child labour).
Needs to be personalized more like adding the logo and donation information.
Great work.
Prefer if the background is slightly blurred.
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well done, idea is too good. keep it up.
Line is not gramatically correct. "get into their fathers shoe'" does not exist as an expression. "Follow in their fathers' footsteps" would be correct. And look out for the correct use of the apostrophe on Fathers'. If their are several children and several fathers, the apostrophe comes after the S.
Otherwise, I like it too.
Agreed.
I have one beef. There's no client. this is just an idea at this point. Who am I donating to?
Again with the working backwards.
Still...this is a killer idea :)
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"Follow in their fathers' footsteps" is not what he's trying to say. Children are forced to do what their fathers do, they have no choice. But I agree with it not being grammatically correct.
One thing, you should try not to repeat what the image is already saying in the headline.
Certainly needs a logo too.
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i like it, however the line about school shoes instead made me cringe, it kills it.
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I liked the copy but visual side it is very flashy, eyes are not static.
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Nice concept, as mentioned before..grammar, and who am I donating to,otherwise..well done.