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child adoption

sunilart's picture
sunilart
Activity Score 34

pretty cool thought

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stsanto
Activity Score 672

you comment to your own work? and as the first comment to it?

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ivan

Is it pen marks on the child's palm? Did the child draw it himself or the adopting parent?

sunilart's picture
sunilart
Activity Score 34

IT IS FATE LINES DRAWN BY THE ADOPTING PARENT(WE INDIANS BELIEVE IN PALMISTRY)

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creativeworm
Activity Score 51

hi sunil... good concept but am sure there is another way to look at it

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Mahmood_Alam
Activity Score 391

sunil think differently and execute it again.
problem is with execution. a good idea is dying.

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sunilart
Activity Score 34

ok am try

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stsanto
Activity Score 672

why erase the original lines on the kid's palm? it looks like a doll's palm, it's dead.

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gulo
Activity Score 461

1. remove the yellow background (not good here).
2. use a better picture. dont keep just the hand. place it in a surrounding
with 1 or 2 ppl as if the scene is in some orphanage.
3. keep the colors cool or neutral.
4. and dont mess with the palms . instead keep it natural while maintaining
the focus on them. those scribbles on the palms look insensitive.

he's right the hand looks dead.

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