77 pencils Cancer Society
trapezeswinger 77 pencils | Mon, 2007-06-04 13:26
Client: Philippine Cancer Society
Did this 2 years ago. People at work quite like it, although now I'm not sure if it was more of a pat on the head coz I was such a young eager beaver, or it's sincerely good.
Help?
It's a copy ad, and I'm art based..so go easy on the copy. :D
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anyone? :D
Sorry, I posted but my connection failed and the post dissappeared. I said that I enjoy it very much, the illustrations are great and the copy is not
bad at all, I like it very much. The copy says a lot of personal things, it draws the character and makes me nood my head. The first one is a vivid portrait of my mother, and the second one, my brother. Congrats, to me, it's a great work.
Regards.
Wow, really? Hee.. I guess we're bound to know at least one person like that! :)
Thanks so much for your comments!!
these are ok but the idea and the execution alltogether is pretty much basic... Take the risk of using a creative technique that has been used (hidden text) so many times before, only if you' re putting something new to it... Otherwise if that was a body copy it's well written and the art direction is ok but still feels a bit.. childish. You 'll do better in the future, i'm sure...
Yeah, I think you're right. Somehow acouplea years ago, I thought the hidden copy was pretty snappy enough to carry the whole thing. :) Thanks so much for the comment!
I like it, buddy. Very good. It's a nice piece of work. Good layout, good text and very nice art direction.
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Thanks!! Thanks!! :)
nice lines