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Breitling Spec Ad

By- Mark Miranda
Intern at LaMini Ad Firm, Barcelona, Spain

Breitling Spec Ad
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dans-hq
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I'm not sure about the copy, it needs to be catchy and to the point. I'm not a copy writer and can't afford a breitling to observe it better but i like to dabble, since i have a few minutes spare...

The font is a no no. How about a justified block half the size it is now, sans serif 12 pt and remove the ghost?

Breitling. A symbol of precision at the speed of life.

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MarkM
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Thanks for the insight. This was the first ad I ever tried making. Since working at this internship though, I have decided that I want to become an Ad Account Executive.

If anyone has any advice, tips, or suggestions about Account Exec, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks,

Mark M

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I'll be honest, it's not a bad attempt for such an advert it's very close to completion.

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Do not follow where the path may lead

Go instead where there is no path and lead a trail

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Amoudy
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Nice work ...but i might say the type of font and the alighnment needs some changes

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