baygon... again..

Hi everyone,
I'm new here, so don't be too harsh with me... :)
The previous work made for baygon inspired me, so... (It may be have already done before)

And please excuse my english i'm quite new in here too...

baygon... again..

6 comments

ivan's picture
ivan

Theres is a bit of confusion of thoughts in this ad. Are you saying that you should keep bugging the mosquitos even when they are dead?

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

ZKL's picture
ZKL
9 pencils

yes you're right, there's a confusion...
I'm french and i'm not very familiar with those kind of expressions.
I tried to fix it.
Tell me what you think.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

i think it sounds better:
"let them rest in peace"
or "helping bugs find peace"

ZKL's picture
ZKL
9 pencils

Helping bugs find peace...
I love that one.
Thanx, i'll fix that later

ivan's picture
ivan

Yes. That line works.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

ZKL's picture
ZKL
9 pencils

Fixed...

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