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baygon... again..

Hi everyone,
I'm new here, so don't be too harsh with me... :)
The previous work made for baygon inspired me, so... (It may be have already done before)

And please excuse my english i'm quite new in here too...

ivan's picture
ivan

Theres is a bit of confusion of thoughts in this ad. Are you saying that you should keep bugging the mosquitos even when they are dead?

ZKL's picture
ZKL
Activity Score 9

yes you're right, there's a confusion...
I'm french and i'm not very familiar with those kind of expressions.
I tried to fix it.
Tell me what you think.

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stsanto
Activity Score 672

i think it sounds better:
"let them rest in peace"
or "helping bugs find peace"

ZKL's picture
ZKL
Activity Score 9

Helping bugs find peace...
I love that one.
Thanx, i'll fix that later

ivan's picture
ivan

Yes. That line works.

ZKL's picture
ZKL
Activity Score 9

Fixed...

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