baygon... again..

Hi everyone,
I'm new here, so don't be too harsh with me... :)
The previous work made for baygon inspired me, so... (It may be have already done before)

And please excuse my english i'm quite new in here too...

baygon... again..

6 comments

ivan's picture
ivan

Theres is a bit of confusion of thoughts in this ad. Are you saying that you should keep bugging the mosquitos even when they are dead?

ZKL's picture
ZKL
9 pencils

yes you're right, there's a confusion...
I'm french and i'm not very familiar with those kind of expressions.
I tried to fix it.
Tell me what you think.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

i think it sounds better:
"let them rest in peace"
or "helping bugs find peace"

ZKL's picture
ZKL
9 pencils

Helping bugs find peace...
I love that one.
Thanx, i'll fix that later

ivan's picture
ivan

Yes. That line works.

ZKL's picture
ZKL
9 pencils

Fixed...

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