Barnes & Noble

My 2nd topic here (1st one is Wikipedia), pls tell me how do u think. :)

Thanks for ur comments.
:D

Barnes & Noble
Barnes & Noble
Barnes & Noble

8 comments

ivan's picture
ivan

For me it's a bit too direct. I'm missing an idea. It's like a brief spelled out.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

jsinth's picture
jsinth
135 pencils

Thanks Ivan. :D

Still waiting for more comments..

Aref's picture
Aref
152 pencils

please for the next time send a smaller ads
i undrstood what you need to say, even the message is simple you can do a great creation.Your message is rather direct not say it about an advertising way, try to push more

Davosk's picture
Davosk
4833 pencils

The Kama Sutra is being used way too often for ideas.

brunislovas's picture
brunislovas
2 pencils

i'd say, it's too direct and too brave. only the "is he straight" could go for mainstream. in other cases you should even avoid appearing the ads for audiences, younger than 16 or 18.

but it's still nice idea.
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bruno//Andrius Rimkunas
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jsinth's picture
jsinth
135 pencils

Thankssssss so much for all comments!
:D

I'll try my best to make it better.
:)

Martijn's picture
Martijn
1900 pencils

I think the message is (like you're Wikipedia ad) very interresting and different. So that's good. But the art and the copy are a little bit weak. I think you should keep the message and try too show it from different angels. Good luck!

jsinth's picture
jsinth
135 pencils

Thanks for your comment.

I'll try my best! :D

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