autoglass ads, put in portfolio or not?

The brief for this was to inform ppl about the fact that a cracked windscreen reduces the srutural integrity of a car by 30%
the last one is a seperate idea and isnt quite finished.

autoglass ads, put in portfolio or not?
autoglass ads, put in portfolio or not?
autoglass ads, put in portfolio or not?

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rikitiki's picture
rikitiki
630 pencils

i think the last one has the most thought behind it.

The first two are just headlines with visuals that don't go beyond the tagline. Not much depth.

spotbot's picture
spotbot
77 pencils

ill give them some more thought cheers

baz's picture
baz
67 pencils

I don’t think they need headlines. Let the visual talk and the tag line answer the image.

stsanto's picture
stsanto
672 pencils

Last one stands, the first two, just hide it dude. for portfolio don't let a drop of sour milk spoil the whole. If you want to use it anyway, get a better photo and work on typography.

spotbot's picture
spotbot
77 pencils

cheers, for advice
art direction needs improving
this site rox

ivan's picture
ivan

Make an unexpected visual. This is too predictable. Definitely not good enough for porti.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

spotbot's picture
spotbot
77 pencils

cheers ivan
will post retry when done

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