Al Sawadi Beach Resort All Inclusive Ad

Agency: SJS Group, Oman
Graphic Designert: Sudheesh Sankar
Copywriter: Vailia Fernades

Al Sawadi Beach Resort All Inclusive Ad

5 comments

ArtGuy's picture
ArtGuy
46 pencils

i think the element on the top corner is distracting

fersvax's picture
fersvax
1239 pencils

I think the element is not distracting, the product shot should be in the right (unless you're gonna publish it in a left page) and the outline of the shell is disturbing. Ah, and the font is unreadable sometimes.

FER.

daprankster's picture
daprankster
422 pencils

the backgroud pushes back

justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
1368 pencils

sudhiasin, does you agency have a website?

ivan's picture
ivan

As a design it's ok, but there is no advertising idea here. Also, 4 star is not something you need to claim, unless you twist it, somehow.

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