Air Asia: Resignation






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Davosk's picture

Hmmm, ok. Not surprising me. It's inside the box. You need a better line.

alvinpck's picture

Just made slight changes to it. Still looking for a better line.

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I don't get it. wanna explain?

Davosk's picture

Ticket prices are so cheap that people will quit their jobs to take advantage of the opportunity.
It lacks wow value. The line is now more confusing. You just need to say 'Very cheap flights'.

alvinpck's picture

Yes, that's the idea. Thanks for the line too, Davosk.

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http://alvinpck.deviantart.com/gallery/

all that work to make me understand their tickets are cheap?
sheesh, you could have told me that in two seconds flat if your ad was clear.

this had me wondering if there was a prison involved.

alvinpck's picture

Also, take a look at the address and position in the letter.

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sad

eugenius's picture

Alvinpck... I Don't get it. Why the pilot need to resign just for that cheap flight. kind of lost here.

Anyway, I think it was done by the same way last year.
I can't recall maybe if i found I'll post it here again.

alvinpck's picture

You don't need the address, seriously. Formats are different everywhere.

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