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AGAINTS DOMESTIC VIOLANCE c&c please.
Submitted by sorayaaulia on Fri, 2007-02-23 14:20.
AGAINTS DOMESTIC VIOLANCE.
I submit this into an advertising contest in my country.
C&C please.
Idea: We're not living a fairytale.
(I've had enough ppl telling me I can't use DISNEY Character without telling them. I'm using this for noncommercial and I KNOW IT. I don't even use this for something else beside the contest. So instead of this disney thing, please c&c).
Thanks.
I have another version of beauty and the beast but I lyk this one better.
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very cute, but maybe too cute for something that is after all a very serious subject. Maybe a close up on cinderella with bruises would do the trick. But then again, I think the whole disney imagery is maybe to nice and cute for this type of ad. It almost makes me laugh,and I shouldn't. I should get shocked. Try to make it more "dark".
The layout is very good though.
Agreed with most of the above.
Also, if you want to keep this ad, I'd take out the copy before the quotes (and Cinderella sobbed), and take out your tagline at the bottom - you don't need it.
Hm. Okay. Will try to find a better copy. For my tagline, I was trying to say; "Your prince charming will harm you. By hitting you." --or something. But I guess I didn't make a twist of it. Thanks anyway.
you know what does battered women have in common?...
they just don't freakin listen.
maybe the presence of the leafs give an aspet more attenuated to a sensitive réality, maybe if you remove the leafs the visual will be more clear, I like line, i love it
Ahahaha, i was trying to make a good layout. Will try. Thanks.
if it won in the top 50 why do you need a comment`????
Err.. Just Because?
i can't believe u came in d top 50 for this!
ur grammar is incorrect..."after all this years"...
it shud've been, "after all these years"
ah yeah.
sorry. ahahaha.
well the original one has a long copy so i made it short.
i'll make it up later. thanks anyway.
I won't be happy too if my girl,wife does not have cleavage.
*grin
yeah i did missed that. I'm not the one who's drawing it.
:D Kekekekekek.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/ripizzo/2345812218/
now that's cute
After all this years, I never learned to spoke the english.
I have to disagree with some of the commenters here. I have no problem with this being "too cute." heck, I never saw this coming and that's why it works.
you're running with the "happily ever after" line we know from so many fairy tales and giving it a reality check. that strategy is a solid class-A winner. this was the kind of insight that made me wish I had had that idea when I saw that and that doesn't happen a lot in this forum.
your line on the other hand is a problem. I didn't understand this at first. it needs to be clearer, more blunt, directer. the same is true for what's going on below your visual. that could be much, much clearer written. spell it out. be blunt, hit me hard. you are being very creative in your approach and with your art direction, so now do it like the brits and pay it off with a no-nonsense and direct approach to copy.
make two more and submit it to young guns, student lions and a bunch of other shows. I can see this getting you a job.
(also consider cleaning up the logo. such a long name.)
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