Account Pitch

Two corporate and two tactical ads.

All constructive criticisms are welcome.

Account Pitch
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2 comments

hartspueler's picture
hartspueler
296 pencils

first two are much better. the text-solution is not as good. here's why: doing a text-campaign inquires either great humor or a deeply touching message. sorry, those lines (and the probably the client) lacks both of em. but try working out the "elimanation" process clearer. and i would work on the line. try making it more touching, maybe something like that you can trust us, you don't have to be afraid etc.

shyamsin's picture
shyamsin
5 pencils

Thanks buddy. Point taken. Will work on them.

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