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Account Pitch

Two corporate and two tactical ads.

All constructive criticisms are welcome.

Account Pitch
Account Pitch
Account Pitch
Account Pitch
hartspueler's picture
hartspueler
Activity Score 296

first two are much better. the text-solution is not as good. here's why: doing a text-campaign inquires either great humor or a deeply touching message. sorry, those lines (and the probably the client) lacks both of em. but try working out the "elimanation" process clearer. and i would work on the line. try making it more touching, maybe something like that you can trust us, you don't have to be afraid etc.

shyamsin's picture
shyamsin
Activity Score 5

Thanks buddy. Point taken. Will work on them.

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