print ad for writers

bollywood bula raha hai..means bollywood calling..
its a campaign for recruting script writers..
need comments or advise

stsanto's picture
Activity Score 672

this ain't a finished work, is it?
if it is,.. then sorry to say this is very bad.
if it is not,.. then remember to add these few things to your list:
- find a proper art to execute your idea, it's not a bad idea, but find something else to represent art juice.
- watch your english, check grammar and vocabs, then ask someone else to read-proof.
- work more on typography, and make sure the font is not jaggy when you blow it to big size.
- when upload to here, consider the size.

clownfish's picture
Activity Score 5

the art work is not finished yet its just a concept i started out with...
thanx for the advice will use it.