GLUT. IDEAS BOUTIQUE

This is the first self-Promotional print of GLUT, an ideas boutique in Buenos Aires, Argentina.
Which belief is that every thing can and must have an idea behind.

GLUT. IDEAS BOUTIQUE

3 comments

LudwigVan's picture
LudwigVan
176 pencils

Puede ser el institucional de cualquier empresa eso, no me dice nada.

HappyHour's picture
HappyHour
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Needs a headline to invoke interest. No chance I'm even beginning to read all that copy without it.

See what I mean here:
http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/national_cancer_society_malaysia_...

JCSaiKrishna's picture
JCSaiKrishna
725 pencils

Divide the copy into more paragraphs to make it more readable.

http://twitter.com/JCSaiKrishna
I'm excited to know my mistakes!

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