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GLUT. IDEAS BOUTIQUE

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Glut
Wednesday, December 22, 2010 - 09:53

This is the first self-Promotional print of GLUT, an ideas boutique in Buenos Aires, Argentina.
Which belief is that every thing can and must have an idea behind.

GLUT. IDEAS BOUTIQUE

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LudwigVanWednesday, December 22, 2010 - 13:26

Puede ser el institucional de cualquier empresa eso, no me dice nada.

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HappyHourWednesday, December 22, 2010 - 15:03

Needs a headline to invoke interest. No chance I'm even beginning to read all that copy without it.

See what I mean here:
http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/national_cancer_society_malaysia_...

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JCSaiKrishnaThursday, December 23, 2010 - 00:11

Divide the copy into more paragraphs to make it more readable.

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