dude I didn't post on a 'guest account', I appreciate all the feedback and as a student hungry to learn more I am always open to new criticism. Sorry to disappoint
The first bubble was just a mock-up before I decided to go through with the art, not very creative at all i know haha.
The text reads wRIstband, I was going to make the bubble out of a wristband, but the ring seemed more appropriate.
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Zzzzz. Please wake me up when there is a new idea here.
Sorry to mock, but this has been done a lot. I like your execution but the idea, meh.
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this idea is fresh, execution awesome.
Mr. Mancer shouldn't be so critical when there is a link to his own work right underneath...
My work shouldn't be your defence for your work. Now stop posting on guest account will ya.
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dude I didn't post on a 'guest account', I appreciate all the feedback and as a student hungry to learn more I am always open to new criticism. Sorry to disappoint
Really well executed, and I really like the idea, but it's quite an obvious idea and I'd be surprised if it hasn't been done before..
also, you should show the whiteout in use where it actually would be used, not on an intangible chat bubble, but on a piece of paper or something
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Bad idea, good art.
I would even say no idea good art.
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Thanks for the feedback guys !
i think this is a fresh approach to a common product in an unexpected way. the last 3 speech bubbles are creative—the first one, not so much.
On the ring one, does that say "wristgard" (sp)?
The first bubble was just a mock-up before I decided to go through with the art, not very creative at all i know haha.
The text reads wRIstband, I was going to make the bubble out of a wristband, but the ring seemed more appropriate.
Very funny. I really did like. Nice copy and fresh art.
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