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Wite-Out spec (Updated)

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Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
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Zzzzz. Please wake me up when there is a new idea here.

Sorry to mock, but this has been done a lot. I like your execution but the idea, meh.

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Guest

this idea is fresh, execution awesome.
Mr. Mancer shouldn't be so critical when there is a link to his own work right underneath...

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Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
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My work shouldn't be your defence for your work. Now stop posting on guest account will ya.

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eghead's picture
eghead
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dude I didn't post on a 'guest account', I appreciate all the feedback and as a student hungry to learn more I am always open to new criticism. Sorry to disappoint

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Joines's picture
Joines
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Really well executed, and I really like the idea, but it's quite an obvious idea and I'd be surprised if it hasn't been done before..

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ineedryan
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also, you should show the whiteout in use where it actually would be used, not on an intangible chat bubble, but on a piece of paper or something

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I'm a Wedding DJ and do ad/marketing for a local companies in Maryland and live near Annapolis, Md. with my family.

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Martijn
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Bad idea, good art.

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Elmārs Ārnieks
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I would even say no idea good art.

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Life is a joke. Laugh.

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Martijn
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True.

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eghead's picture
eghead
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Thanks for the feedback guys !

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macluvin
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i think this is a fresh approach to a common product in an unexpected way. the last 3 speech bubbles are creative—the first one, not so much.

On the ring one, does that say "wristgard" (sp)?

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eghead's picture
eghead
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The first bubble was just a mock-up before I decided to go through with the art, not very creative at all i know haha.
The text reads wRIstband, I was going to make the bubble out of a wristband, but the ring seemed more appropriate.

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marcospaulo
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Very funny. I really did like. Nice copy and fresh art.

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