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Wite-Out spec (Updated)

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Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Wite-Out spec (Updated)
Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
Activity Score 6992

Zzzzz. Please wake me up when there is a new idea here.

Sorry to mock, but this has been done a lot. I like your execution but the idea, meh.

Guest's picture
Guest

this idea is fresh, execution awesome.
Mr. Mancer shouldn't be so critical when there is a link to his own work right underneath...

Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
Activity Score 6992

My work shouldn't be your defence for your work. Now stop posting on guest account will ya.

eghead's picture
eghead
Activity Score 128

dude I didn't post on a 'guest account', I appreciate all the feedback and as a student hungry to learn more I am always open to new criticism. Sorry to disappoint

Joines's picture
Joines
Activity Score 181

Really well executed, and I really like the idea, but it's quite an obvious idea and I'd be surprised if it hasn't been done before..

ineedryan's picture
ineedryan
Activity Score 169

also, you should show the whiteout in use where it actually would be used, not on an intangible chat bubble, but on a piece of paper or something

I'm a Wedding DJ and do ad/marketing for a local companies in Maryland and live near Annapolis, Md. with my family.

Martijn's picture
Martijn
Activity Score 1888

Bad idea, good art.

Elmārs Ārnieks's picture
Elmārs Ārnieks
Activity Score 840

I would even say no idea good art.

Life is a joke. Laugh.

Martijn's picture
Martijn
Activity Score 1888

True.

eghead's picture
eghead
Activity Score 128

Thanks for the feedback guys !

macluvin's picture
macluvin
Activity Score 397

i think this is a fresh approach to a common product in an unexpected way. the last 3 speech bubbles are creative—the first one, not so much.

On the ring one, does that say "wristgard" (sp)?

eghead's picture
eghead
Activity Score 128

The first bubble was just a mock-up before I decided to go through with the art, not very creative at all i know haha.
The text reads wRIstband, I was going to make the bubble out of a wristband, but the ring seemed more appropriate.

marcospaulo's picture
marcospaulo
Activity Score 20

Very funny. I really did like. Nice copy and fresh art.

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