Linc Signature press ad

Feedback and criticism welcome

Linc Signature press ad
Linc Signature press ad

5 comments

Martijn's picture
Martijn
1888 pencils

I like the concept of the first one, but you have to push your idea further. Like this it is bad advertising.

riyelam's picture
riyelam
366 pencils

Could you suggest something. As I'm a learner I want to know how to push.

Martijn's picture
Martijn
1888 pencils

In the first one you're telling a story, the story of all the things that can happen in a lifetime and the role that that only pen is playing in all those happenings. Problem is, like this, your story is lame and not interesting.

Tell a more interesting story, make it beautiful. It's not the story you should tell, but did you know Hitler's signature changed a lot during the war? In the beginning it was big and self-insured, at the end small and fragile.

Guest's picture
Guest

1st u have to know what is ur subject and what is ur predicate. Subject will be highlight and predicate will be sub due. but here 2nd ad both r same. Next for the 2nd AD Santa is a symbol of gift, not entering......and try to improve ur execution

riyelam's picture
riyelam
366 pencils

Thanx

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