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Feedback and criticism welcome
I like the concept of the first one, but you have to push your idea further. Like this it is bad advertising.
Could you suggest something. As I'm a learner I want to know how to push.
In the first one you're telling a story, the story of all the things that can happen in a lifetime and the role that that only pen is playing in all those happenings. Problem is, like this, your story is lame and not interesting.
Tell a more interesting story, make it beautiful. It's not the story you should tell, but did you know Hitler's signature changed a lot during the war? In the beginning it was big and self-insured, at the end small and fragile.
1st u have to know what is ur subject and what is ur predicate. Subject will be highlight and predicate will be sub due. but here 2nd ad both r same. Next for the 2nd AD Santa is a symbol of gift, not entering......and try to improve ur execution