Perfume Ad

Comments please?

Is it the copy you are looking for comment on? To me it just looks like you got a girl in a suit, stuck on a photo of perfume, and then called it a perfume ad. So I'm at a little bit of a loss to the idea. Any detail on your brief at all?

I presume she gained confidence after using perfume. ?

"i type in courier new"? hmm. This wouldn't work and it totally goes against the Chanel brand. Sorry, this one is a miss.

what is this? you 're just copying the magnum commercial

Thanks for the comments. Yes I was just looking for a comment on the copy (again I'm not a graphic designer). I don't know of the magnum commercial you're talking about but they just might sound similar. A lot of perfume ads are just women posing with the bottle and I wanted to ad some copy. That might have been where I failed, especially for just trying to ad something to what is consistently done instead of trying to be creative. I had a difficult time finding a perfume catered to the professional woman so I used Chanel...again that was my mistake. Thanks again for commenting!

I appreciate your effort in trying to do something 'different' by adding copy. However, what it needs is an idea.

And while I would agree most ads are about a woman posing with a bottle of perfume, it doesn't mean you can't create an idea in this category. Something like this for example:

http://www.perfume4u.co.uk/acatalog/dior_poison_main.jpg

(Sorry about the small size. This is the best I could get hold of.)