22 pencils Need input: Ad and Business Card
harobike123 22 pencils | Sun, 2010-03-14 15:50
I need constructive criticism on this set. Please comment.
22 pencils 
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I like the idea you are portraying in the ad however I feel the copy is a little weak. Words like 'belly up' are a little soft. Maybe something in the vein of {VISUAL) underneath: Computer RX - when your computer goes belly up. Change the layout - visual first, logo & tag line.
Don't like the typeface for the detail side of card - too common - Have seen that typeface a billion times - you need something new here.
Layout of card with logo & contact details works fine.