Nice idea. Copy is a little too focussed on the architecture of the museum and relates little to 'whats inside'. I'd presume an ad for a museum would be focussed on the merit of the museum and possibly an exhibition it might be holding. Art direction is a little sketchy in that painting & image montage off kilter and too close without the requisite breathing space. But good stuff at the end of the day - Ideas, ideas, ideas are what is most important.
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copy is good, but i dont know if its good to show exactly what the copy sais?
Gotcha - a little see say. Thanks for the feedback.
Nice idea. Copy is a little too focussed on the architecture of the museum and relates little to 'whats inside'. I'd presume an ad for a museum would be focussed on the merit of the museum and possibly an exhibition it might be holding. Art direction is a little sketchy in that painting & image montage off kilter and too close without the requisite breathing space. But good stuff at the end of the day - Ideas, ideas, ideas are what is most important.