i like the cleanliness and the color combination of the layout. on the concept two points on personal observation:
a. putting the lion on top of the car disturbs me
b. the copy is saying 'mid life cricis' and the pics is showing 'a car as a symbol of desire/affordibility' where as head copy sayn 'help you save for important things'. to me, these three objects are not fully correlating. wonder whether the message will get diluted in midway.
The overall concept works for me. Financials can be a stuffy crowd--so for a client unwilling to take risks, it fits the bill. The headline and subheadline work together. I guess I agree with Ivan, it's a little boring. Maybe push the idea a little further to create more excitement. What other activities would someone do in a midlife crisis?
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This makes me associate ING with midlife crisis losers.
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i like the cleanliness and the color combination of the layout. on the concept two points on personal observation:
a. putting the lion on top of the car disturbs me
b. the copy is saying 'mid life cricis' and the pics is showing 'a car as a symbol of desire/affordibility' where as head copy sayn 'help you save for important things'. to me, these three objects are not fully correlating. wonder whether the message will get diluted in midway.
shahid
I like the twist in copy, but overall the ad is a boring.
The overall concept works for me. Financials can be a stuffy crowd--so for a client unwilling to take risks, it fits the bill. The headline and subheadline work together. I guess I agree with Ivan, it's a little boring. Maybe push the idea a little further to create more excitement. What other activities would someone do in a midlife crisis?
thanks for your comments, will try to push the idea further to create more excitement
It's descend work. Not award winning, not even frontpage, but it works fine I think and it would make me smile seeing it in the newspaper.
any more comments?