Jimmy Choo Summer collection escarpins

this is a campaign for college,i would love all the criticism i can get

heh...loooove the idea bro... but what if the person loves the shoe but is put off by the impressions it leaves

the idea was that u cant leave your house in summer without the shoes...that is why the whole leg has got a tan except for the part where the shoes are.
u put up a good point tho shud have been a bit more direct myb some copy

I like it! The overall concept is a good one. Women that love Jimmy Choos won't care about the tan lines, lol. I would say that I don't feel the "luxury" of a $600 shoe though. Maybe do this concept with a lady in a cabana on the beach? I know you are going for simple but doesn't feel high end.

P.S. Photoshop those toes some more, they are kind of curled funny.