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Eyeglasses

For zappos.com/eyeglasses

shahidali's picture
shahidali
Activity Score 4069

i like these copies. but connotation of the purpose of a eyeglass may vary and have different resposse.

shahid

Elmārs Ārnieks's picture
Elmārs Ārnieks
Activity Score 840

ok for me

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maranca82's picture
maranca82
Activity Score 422

Copy is pretty good, but I'd play around with the layout. Maybe try different angles for the glasses and placement for the copy.

everartz's picture
everartz
Activity Score 7609

the ads seem very flat even the copy has a bit of a twist.. the art needs revisiting..

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Archie's picture
Archie
Activity Score 201

thanks everybody. do the headlines make sense? are some better than other?

ivan's picture
ivan

Good idea, but I agree with shahidali.

CurryJ's picture
CurryJ
Activity Score 955

Love the thought behind the copy...it works well for this category.

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