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Greenpeace poster design.

Greenpeace poster design.
suvo's picture
suvo
Activity Score 9

The art is good but need to take care of background also...

CC3's picture
CC3
Activity Score 730

Water, baby bottle, Not just water? If it wasn't for the description under the ad I'd have no idea what it is your trying to say.

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Good is the enemy of great.

Marlus Lau's picture
Marlus Lau
Activity Score 1808

I like the way "Not just water" is written but I didn't get the message!

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joelam
Activity Score 11

the idea is... the industrial water pollution in China is so serious. if we dont solve it as soon as possible. It not just water`s problem only. It would be affect our next generation as child. And they are our future. If the water pollution keeping like this, our child wont have clean water to drink anymore.

CC3's picture
CC3
Activity Score 730

Based on that insight you should simplify your idea. It is more design than idea at this point.

Good luck!

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Good is the enemy of great.

joelam's picture
joelam
Activity Score 11

thanks all your comments

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Jaap Grolleman
Activity Score 6992

Love that pay-off, "Not just water". Love how that's designed.
Idea itself, not that genius.

And am I missing a logo as well? I thought it was for Greenpeace?

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joelam
Activity Score 11

it was for greenpeace really. because it was shown in a greenpeace exhibition in HK. so they allowed us dont put the logo on it.
and thanks your comment.

joelam's picture
joelam
Activity Score 11

it was for greenpeace really. because it was shown in a greenpeace exhibition in HK. so they allowed us dont put the logo on it.
and thanks your comment.

anjie's picture
anjie
Activity Score 4

Very nice design, love it! But indeed the idea is not really clear.
Maybe you could replace: "not just water", with the meaning you want to show about the next generation.

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Dewdrop
Activity Score 60

Needs a little touchup but i like where you are going with this.

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Shawali
Activity Score 8442

Guys, please don't revive old posts. The OP hasn't been around for almost 3 years.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

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