Greenpeace poster design.

Greenpeace poster design.

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suvo's picture
suvo
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The art is good but need to take care of background also...

CC3's picture
CC3
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Water, baby bottle, Not just water? If it wasn't for the description under the ad I'd have no idea what it is your trying to say.

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Marlus Lau's picture
Marlus Lau
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I like the way "Not just water" is written but I didn't get the message!

joelam's picture
joelam
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the idea is... the industrial water pollution in China is so serious. if we dont solve it as soon as possible. It not just water`s problem only. It would be affect our next generation as child. And they are our future. If the water pollution keeping like this, our child wont have clean water to drink anymore.

CC3's picture
CC3
734 pencils

Based on that insight you should simplify your idea. It is more design than idea at this point.

Good luck!

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Good is the enemy of great.

joelam's picture
joelam
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thanks all your comments

Jaap Grolleman's picture
Jaap Grolleman
7004 pencils

Love that pay-off, "Not just water". Love how that's designed.
Idea itself, not that genius.

And am I missing a logo as well? I thought it was for Greenpeace?

joelam's picture
joelam
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it was for greenpeace really. because it was shown in a greenpeace exhibition in HK. so they allowed us dont put the logo on it.
and thanks your comment.

joelam's picture
joelam
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it was for greenpeace really. because it was shown in a greenpeace exhibition in HK. so they allowed us dont put the logo on it.
and thanks your comment.

anjie's picture
anjie
4 pencils

Very nice design, love it! But indeed the idea is not really clear.
Maybe you could replace: "not just water", with the meaning you want to show about the next generation.

Dewdrop's picture
Dewdrop
60 pencils

Needs a little touchup but i like where you are going with this.

Shawali's picture
Shawali
8395 pencils

Guys, please don't revive old posts. The OP hasn't been around for almost 3 years.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

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