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UNICEF Awareness Campaign (NEED SOME FEEDBACK) thanks

DinOz (16 pencils | Sun, 2009-11-01 14:34
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give some comment.. Thanks a lot..

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AmOgodzzz | Mon, 2009-11-02 00:14

The copy is way off. It's basically describing your concept and line of thinking, which makes it boring. Also, if the visual is compelling enough, you shouldn't have that much copy and you certainly shouldn't need this much writing to explain your idea. Because the visual doesn't communicate your idea well, it needs the copy as a crutch.

Also, I'm not really feeling the idea itself. Looks very forced to me, and a bit cheesy.

I do like the layout and art direction, for all it's worth.

www.hellofawzy.carbonmade.com

DinOz's picture 16 pencils
DinOz | Tue, 2009-11-03 04:53

thanks for your comment.. i get it.. thanks..

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Guest | Tue, 2009-11-03 07:00

nice visual! i like it! keep it up!

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Guest | Tue, 2009-11-03 07:22

nice visual! i like it..keep it up.

DinOz's picture 16 pencils
DinOz | Wed, 2009-11-11 20:54

thanks..

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