AQUA LABEL

THIS IS THE LABEL FOR LOCAL AQUA COMP. RAJHANS

 AQUA LABEL

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funky_frogii
2538 pencils

ready to print dude.....make the rajhans bold and the aqua in regular.

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firebug's picture
firebug
1117 pencils

thank u

dsklan's picture
dsklan
1927 pencils

such a nice picture, but you destroy it with this copytext overload.

firebug's picture
firebug
1117 pencils

thanx sir

RAM KATE's picture
RAM KATE
765 pencils

Excellent visual but the text has been overloaded . Try to cut and keep only what is really required and that will make it more balanced ad copy.

RAM KATE

corteze87's picture
corteze87
17 pencils

I love this ad. I think it has very good potential. I feel that maybe if you just made it simple it would have more of a direct effect. I don't think that Rjahans's logo needed to be in the ad twice. Maybe try without the text box outline. I think that we always should keep in mind as designers to remind ourselves to leave something for the audience to "think" of. We need to have them "think" of our ad. I know it's hard because we have too many idiots looking at ads now days. Overall I love the quality of your picture and the concept of your ad. It just needs a little bit of "tweaking".

firebug's picture
firebug
1117 pencils

thanks guyes

mmackinven's picture
mmackinven
1589 pencils

Is this a bottle label?

Guest's picture
Guest

yes

firebug's picture
firebug
1117 pencils

yes

Davosk's picture
Davosk
4833 pencils

This would have more impact if you mocked up a real bottle to highlight the label. Here it looks like a very confused print ad, which I thought it was until someone pointed out the fact.

soms's picture
soms
377 pencils

cool.............

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Guest

This could be so much better. Just keep it to yourself, man.

firebug's picture
firebug
1117 pencils

thank u guys

Dalbir Singh's picture
Dalbir Singh
552 pencils

Don't like the font you used for Aqua. Could have been subtle like Rajhans.
The background image is so generic that I won't spot the difference from this brand vs the others out there when I go to a hypermarket.

Evian has a strong look and feel and that pink stands out. What stands out in your label? Nothing.

Perrier has a strong logo plus green.

I think you need to come up a strong differentiating icon, logo and color on your label.

Other then that, the backside is too cluttered.

firebug's picture
firebug
1117 pencils

thanx for comment damon........

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