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AQUA LABEL

THIS IS THE LABEL FOR LOCAL AQUA COMP. RAJHANS

 AQUA LABEL
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ready to print dude.....make the rajhans bold and the aqua in regular.

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thank u

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such a nice picture, but you destroy it with this copytext overload.

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thanx sir

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Excellent visual but the text has been overloaded . Try to cut and keep only what is really required and that will make it more balanced ad copy.

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I love this ad. I think it has very good potential. I feel that maybe if you just made it simple it would have more of a direct effect. I don't think that Rjahans's logo needed to be in the ad twice. Maybe try without the text box outline. I think that we always should keep in mind as designers to remind ourselves to leave something for the audience to "think" of. We need to have them "think" of our ad. I know it's hard because we have too many idiots looking at ads now days. Overall I love the quality of your picture and the concept of your ad. It just needs a little bit of "tweaking".

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thanks guyes

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Is this a bottle label?

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yes

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yes

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This would have more impact if you mocked up a real bottle to highlight the label. Here it looks like a very confused print ad, which I thought it was until someone pointed out the fact.

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cool.............

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This could be so much better. Just keep it to yourself, man.

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thank u guys

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Don't like the font you used for Aqua. Could have been subtle like Rajhans.
The background image is so generic that I won't spot the difference from this brand vs the others out there when I go to a hypermarket.

Evian has a strong look and feel and that pink stands out. What stands out in your label? Nothing.

Perrier has a strong logo plus green.

I think you need to come up a strong differentiating icon, logo and color on your label.

Other then that, the backside is too cluttered.

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thanx for comment damon........

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