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This is a great execution and a clever way of using the medium to make the point in an original way. However, I don't like the line very much. It's a bit stale. With a better line, you'd have a stellar ad.
Thanx for your valuable comment..
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hello..pls comment..
hey, i really like this. clever use of a fold out.
you could improve the line though. 'music is on' doesn't sound right somehow.
although, the visual is so strong, i think it could do without a line.
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thank u ojaswi bhai..
i like it. very nice!
Quite cool yaar just do something with your copy its actully quite boreing
Sarvagya
thanx..will work on copy..
gud work done yaar.....laga reh!!!!
thanx..akash..
Well I'm going to point out the obvious: It looks phallic.
I'd work on the illustration. And yes, the copy is yawnsville.
But I agree with everyone who says the idea is a great use of media. Nice :)
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LOL. Totally agree. Without the microphone it gives a naughty impression. Maybe working on a solution for the illustration.
Idea and medium chosen is nice.
good work...
| Everartz |
hello guys..i want more criticism..
I like the idea.
Thanx..ivan..
hey i like it....
very nice idea, but as mentioned the copy is not so good
how about "vocal cords, relieved" or something like that
"I don't live in Greece, Greece lives in me..."
yes.. u r right HellasLover..i appreciate your comment n also like the copy "vocal cords, relieved" ....
Why the microphone? Is this a music publication or something like that? At first glance it just seems like you needed something to fit into the hand the figure is coughing into. Feels a bit forced.
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Good is the enemy of great.
Thnx for your feedback. The microphone is not forced in. It is the symbolic presentaion of your throught getting cured from cough. Microphone we use for louder voice & clarity. Coughing reduces it. It is meant to say that your throat gets cured completely & your voice comes out uninterrupted. Though it shows for singing, the idea is meant for all.
Thats quite the explanation but just sounds like your trying to convince yourself why not to explore this further
I would revisit this idea and really work on it. Try doing more than one execution of the idea to help flesh it out.
Right now just comes off as an execution looking for an idea. You need some context because the visual solution is less conceptual and more just merely convenient.
Good luck.
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Good is the enemy of great.
dont like it.. poor illustration.........