Education

Education... Makes Futures Certain

Education
Education

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shahidali's picture
shahidali
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u mean quality over quantity. right?
the route is fine and the execution is good. but u can set the bar even higher. when u promote quality, your quality should also speak for it.

shahid

Wordnerd's picture
Wordnerd
6662 pencils

very nice. But you don't need that much copy. you should have a line as clean and clear as your visuals.

You said it all in the last sentence:
"Turn active minds into specialists". what's missing is to tell people what to do. Where can they discover their Talents? Where do they get the right education? Is there an Industrie in need of young people to apply?

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