I wrote a response for that, but I decided to let the ad run free a little longer.
But I have to say that I inicialy was worried about this piece being to obvious. You both proved me wrong. But still I'm shocked with my mind or yours. Haven't decided that yet.
I think it's pretty obvious. You're promising to work hard and win awards for your employer, and drink champagne when you do.
But I agree with you about it being a bit obvious. To me it is clear, and I like the layout. But it doesn't grab me. At this stage it is just boasting about what you are GOING TO do. Well, with due respect: 'Oh yeah?' Anyone can SAY they're going to be great. It *might* encourage me to look at the portfolio, but in itself it is just saying how great you are, not proving it.
Self-promo ads are hard though, so marks for trying. But I'd rather see ads for clients. Don't tell me you're great. Show me.
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beautiful art.. but i dont get it :D
| Everartz |
Are you saying for every hard work done, they will be celebration?
I wrote a response for that, but I decided to let the ad run free a little longer.
But I have to say that I inicialy was worried about this piece being to obvious. You both proved me wrong. But still I'm shocked with my mind or yours. Haven't decided that yet.
And on another thread you were just saying how you got something but the 'average audience' wouldn't! Unintended irony is always the funniest.
I think it's pretty obvious. You're promising to work hard and win awards for your employer, and drink champagne when you do.
But I agree with you about it being a bit obvious. To me it is clear, and I like the layout. But it doesn't grab me. At this stage it is just boasting about what you are GOING TO do. Well, with due respect: 'Oh yeah?' Anyone can SAY they're going to be great. It *might* encourage me to look at the portfolio, but in itself it is just saying how great you are, not proving it.
Self-promo ads are hard though, so marks for trying. But I'd rather see ads for clients. Don't tell me you're great. Show me.