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how did this photoshoot take place? so many pairs of shoes collected.
well, i like the concept. art direction seems to have immense area of improvement. the boys apathetic face discourages me. it should reflect the moods of the TG.
also, is there a mannequin/doll of a human at the bottom of the lamp?
shahid
I don't really understand the idea. Can you help?
with hotmail you get some extra space to keep things you want
well ivan, as i perceived it:
main message is: 5GB is a lot of space and you can store as much garbage as you want
elcf showed the TG which is a young teenager and a lot of shoes/keds representing the garbages which needs more space than he has.
the idea is nice to me but i see the problem in execution. the mundane layout, weak art direction and the expression of the protagonist boy...if those elements can be reworked, this thing has the potential to turn out to be a better piece.
btw, i faced another small problem. is the subconsicious mind also telling us that 5GB is not a big space when gmail is unlimited?
shahid
Again, sorry about the english.
I agree with yours and Ivan's comments. I will work this better and post it again.
There's just one point to comment. You both agreed that his face should be happy/satisfied but in my humble creative route I chose an unhappy/unsatisfied boy because he is actually unhappy with the lack of space for his stuff. In this case, his shoes doesnt fit the closet.
Can I have a new opinion before making the changes?
Thank you both for the comments.
not a happy man, he can show a desparate/disgusted/... mood. whatever that mood be, he must have the agility of a youth. don't make him a boy whose big brother has died before paying him the pocket money.
shahid
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but i think you keep the dearty thinks in this exta space i think the message is bad, the concept is good but the idea
Guest just gave the push that I needed. I agree with all coments and will take this concept to some other piece.
I will post very shortly with some new layout ideas. TK
Guest just gave what I needed to dump this idea. I will work this concept in some other piece and post back soon.
where did you get all these shoes from anyway!?
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