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Uncut-Diamond

Is it my body and heart made for it ? I want to feel the colors of childhood..

Uncut-Diamond
shanuea's picture
shanuea
Activity Score 781

I don't get it - not clear.

habib79in's picture
habib79in
Activity Score 116

let me explain the connectivity:
1. Visual : Childhood : A huge difference..
2. HeadLIne: Childhood like UNCUT DIAMOND needs to care a lot to convert into a diamond..
3. BodyCopy is her Feeling (Is it my body and heart made for it ? I want to feel the colors of childhood..) She is sad to see other kids are happy and playing very well..
4. (Save the Children) the message..

shanuea's picture
shanuea
Activity Score 781

A bit too abstract I'm afraid.

habib79in's picture
habib79in
Activity Score 116

Now I'm Afraid..

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Justin Turco
Activity Score 182

Yeah I'm not sure anyone would understand this.

habib79in's picture
habib79in
Activity Score 116

Is it really complicated..

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ShittyWaffle
Activity Score 123

I see where you're getting at it with the child symbolizing the reflecting diamond ( I think?), but as stated above, it's not simple or clear enough.

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markjlkohnson
Activity Score 8

Yes, its complicated but nice.

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Austin Video Pr...
Activity Score 1274

I think it draws your attention to the black and white image nicely.

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janaka illangarathne
Activity Score 247

I think Idea is safe. but not enough art direction and execution.

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Bob.C
Activity Score 1161

With the explanation, I get it, but the body copy and visuals need work. There are quite a few things that could improve it - remove the child from the left and maybe the girl to the right of the little girl so the isolation is clearer. Rotate the Uncut Diamond text so it reads better. Since you had to explain it to us the "Is it my body and heart made for it ? I want to feel the colors of childhood" probably needs changing to explain better to the reader better.

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