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Uncut-Diamond

Is it my body and heart made for it ? I want to feel the colors of childhood..

Uncut-Diamond
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shanuea
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I don't get it - not clear.

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habib79in
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let me explain the connectivity:
1. Visual : Childhood : A huge difference..
2. HeadLIne: Childhood like UNCUT DIAMOND needs to care a lot to convert into a diamond..
3. BodyCopy is her Feeling (Is it my body and heart made for it ? I want to feel the colors of childhood..) She is sad to see other kids are happy and playing very well..
4. (Save the Children) the message..

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shanuea
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A bit too abstract I'm afraid.

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habib79in
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Now I'm Afraid..

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Justin Turco's picture
Justin Turco
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Yeah I'm not sure anyone would understand this.

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habib79in's picture
habib79in
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Is it really complicated..

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ShittyWaffle
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I see where you're getting at it with the child symbolizing the reflecting diamond ( I think?), but as stated above, it's not simple or clear enough.

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markjlkohnson
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Yes, its complicated but nice.

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Austin Video Pr...
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I think it draws your attention to the black and white image nicely.

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janaka illangarathne
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I think Idea is safe. but not enough art direction and execution.

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Bob.C
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With the explanation, I get it, but the body copy and visuals need work. There are quite a few things that could improve it - remove the child from the left and maybe the girl to the right of the little girl so the isolation is clearer. Rotate the Uncut Diamond text so it reads better. Since you had to explain it to us the "Is it my body and heart made for it ? I want to feel the colors of childhood" probably needs changing to explain better to the reader better.

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