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Diabetes Day...

Debate

Diabetes Day...
Diabetes Day...
Diabetes Day...
Diabetes Day...
Diabetes Day...
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baanke@gmail.com
Activity Score 111

suggestions plzzzzz....

Thanks & Regards,
BAANKE

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Hellas
Activity Score 1172

Visuals are not interesting in any way, and it's not telling me anything about why coconuts or tea are bad for you (if they are). Copy is too long. These look more like posters you 'll see somewhere that display information (diabetes symptoms) but does not make a good ad...ads are for attracting attention and giving a message in a creative way and/or with a "twist", this is not happening here. I'm not sure what "debate to know the fact of diabetes" means either.

"I don't live in Greece, Greece lives in me..."

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Shawali
Activity Score 8442

I totally agree with Hella. No idea, utterly boring art direction. I think you confuse "debate" with "discuss". Basically, it should read "discuss to the know the facts of diabetes". It looks like posters you would see in a doctor waiting room or in a school. But maybe that what it is?

Anyway, advertising-wise, this is very poor and uninteresting, unfortunately.

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courtneycopy
Activity Score 10

What do any of these have to do with debating? It doesn't make any sense. As others have said, there's too much copy and the photos are bland.

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markjlkohnson
Activity Score 8

Everyone should know about this.

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Nuno Flores
Activity Score 122

It´s very confuse.

Sugestion: Try to find an concept or insight and work them.

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