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i want the feed back

Shawali's picture
Activity Score 8442

Like the previous one, it lacks an idea. "We have current, do you?" can be a good line, but it fails to be creatively exploited.

Too many different fonts and size. The body copy has a lot of unnecessary caps is missing a space of the last coma.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!!