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Gatorade Prime Chews

Idea I had for Gatorade prime chews

Gatorade prime chews are energy chews designed to give athletes the proper nutrients before the game to make sure the perform at their peak.

I wanted to show the consumer that difference between winning and losing starts at the beginning

Simple Idea, just want some feedback. Love this site, and the rough feedback lol

Tagline: Victory starts with Prime

Justin Turco's picture
Justin Turco
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kerning

jteslik's picture
jteslik
Activity Score 1393

Oh dear. See, since the latter part of the text is orange, I'm associating it with your product. So you're giving me the exact opposite message. I just read "Defeated, beaten, standing." Also, the first line is the only one that works. Second line seems like a copy of the first line, third line doesn't really mean anything to me, as I don't know what "standing" means out of context. Concept is kinda neat. Not sure if it's been done before. I like the copy approach though.

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