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Escape to Africa
I don't get what you are selling here? If anything.
Did you do the illustration yourself?
No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094
I will almost always thumbs-down ads with animals. Not your fault, because it's a good way to relate your product, but I'm just not a fan.
Can't wait to see this all-animal rendition of the the classic Shakespearian tragedy...
Wait a minute. Is this is an ad for Africa?
Nice art, but what is it selling?
It's a pets shop, of course.
A giraffe is a highly domesticable animal, of course.
Good start. If you want to keep the zebra riding a giraffe, you need to add another dimension for it on the bottom (i.e. walking along street in front of the "building wall") . In the type "a beautiful place to love" consider a new hierarchy, where words "beautiful, place and love" are emphasized, and "a, to" subordinated. Remove all unnecessary embellishment (floral "decoration") above and below the type. Why is the railing on the balcony curved? Straighten it! Romeo & Juliet in africa is the title? Make it the focal point! Close the shutters behind the zebra and pull his head behind the railing. Remove potted plant on balcony. Remove stains below balcony. Remove Zebra riding Giraffe. Remove white mark between balcony zebras front legs. Increase title text size.