Land Rover Discovery (Updated!)

Critique much appreciated.
Got rid off the boots and threw in the car lol.

Land Rover Discovery (Updated!)

7 comments

mattndan's picture
mattndan
953 pencils

Good line, crap art

_ZigZagWanderer_'s picture
_ZigZagWanderer_
26 pencils

Yeah the more I looked at it once posted I wasn't so keen lol I'll work on it.
Thanks!

Siddarth Basavaraj's picture
Siddarth Basavaraj
1673 pencils

A very good copy :)

Love creating ads..

Shawali's picture
Shawali
8413 pencils

Wouldn't it sound better if the copy was "take the less traveled roads more often"? It maybe smoother.

But that's just me =)

Anyway, great insight. But crap art indeed =)

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

_ZigZagWanderer_'s picture
_ZigZagWanderer_
26 pencils

Thanks guys, arts really not my strong point, I feel i have to limit myself as I cannot really execute my ideas well as i'm not great on photoshop. Should I just draw them out free hand or maybe try download illustrator or indesign?

mattndan's picture
mattndan
953 pencils

I would maybe make this a mainly copy campaign or try and work with an art director. Its a nice line, but try to come up with a few more of the same caliber to avoid it feeling like a one-off.

Shawali, I think 'the road less travelled' is a common phrase(?), hence why it might work better as he's written it. Both are fine though :-)

prasadrishi's picture
prasadrishi
115 pencils

Nice copy...

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