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Critique much appreciated.
Got rid off the boots and threw in the car lol.
Good line, crap art
Yeah the more I looked at it once posted I wasn't so keen lol I'll work on it.
A very good copy :)
Love creating ads..
Wouldn't it sound better if the copy was "take the less traveled roads more often"? It maybe smoother.
But that's just me =)
Anyway, great insight. But crap art indeed =)
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Thanks guys, arts really not my strong point, I feel i have to limit myself as I cannot really execute my ideas well as i'm not great on photoshop. Should I just draw them out free hand or maybe try download illustrator or indesign?
I would maybe make this a mainly copy campaign or try and work with an art director. Its a nice line, but try to come up with a few more of the same caliber to avoid it feeling like a one-off.
Shawali, I think 'the road less travelled' is a common phrase(?), hence why it might work better as he's written it. Both are fine though :-)