Castrol GTX

Sorry again for the bad Photoshop.
Looking forward for your feedback.
Thank you.

Castrol GTX
Castrol GTX

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Shawali's picture
Shawali
8393 pencils

Hi there.

These two ads doesn't work. Here's why:

You broke one of the most important rules of good advertising, even though it gets broken every now and then in real life : you used sex to sell something that has nothing to do with sex. It is widely considered to be a really cheap trick. It was certainly rolling high in the 80's but now it's just a big no-no. It's not funny and it's boring. Your book won't be looking any good with these in it.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

crisp's picture
crisp
1506 pencils

Thank you, Shawali. I guess this is due to my lack of experience, cause didn't know this rule. I'll start again from scratch.

Shawali's picture
Shawali
8393 pencils

It's ok. We all have been through this. =)

Good luck and don't hesitate to post your work, I'll be happy to comment.

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

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