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Sorry again for the bad Photoshop.
Looking forward for your feedback.
These two ads doesn't work. Here's why:
You broke one of the most important rules of good advertising, even though it gets broken every now and then in real life : you used sex to sell something that has nothing to do with sex. It is widely considered to be a really cheap trick. It was certainly rolling high in the 80's but now it's just a big no-no. It's not funny and it's boring. Your book won't be looking any good with these in it.
No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094
Thank you, Shawali. I guess this is due to my lack of experience, cause didn't know this rule. I'll start again from scratch.
It's ok. We all have been through this. =)
Good luck and don't hesitate to post your work, I'll be happy to comment.