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Think you can do this ad better?

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Rchuecos22
Friday, May 25, 2012 - 11:51

Maybe you can, but I just wanted to get overall feedback about the idea.

Let your thoughts flow

Think you can do this ad better?

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drkstr17Friday, May 25, 2012 - 14:25

Not sure if there's an idea here, so I don't know how i can work in a series And I think it would be a better headline if this were the 80s. Rockstars don't really do this anymore. I think you could find a more relevant and stronger insight.

Also, "Think you can do this ad better?" Awkward.

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Rchuecos22Friday, May 25, 2012 - 15:40

Ok thanks for the feed back. How would you say it then? Can you top this ad?

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Milan SolankiSaturday, May 26, 2012 - 05:35

divert your focus on logistics. Pick a benefit that you want to feature, may be on time thing, as you have mentioned. Check this awesome ad on logistic for your reference http://adsoftheworld.com/media/print/tpc_group_santa_claus