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Jenga

Friday, May 18, 2012 - 01:05

This is a only one piece work, made by me for Dentsu Student Competition By IAA.
The idea was to incentive the implementation of sustainable developement for goverments, industry and society.
I know is not the best desing but I think it's actually a great idea!.
Hope you like it! :)

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mattndanFriday, May 18, 2012 - 06:53

The tower looks like its levitating.

Its OK, a first thought execution wise. I think you could push the execution much further, the idea is good though.

http://www.mattndan.co.uk/

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ShawaliFriday, May 18, 2012 - 08:00

Sorry to be the party pooper, but I'm not a fan of the idea. I watch this ad and nothing tells me it's about the implementation of bla bla bla... I had to read your explanation to get it.

And did you really think about the order you put these flags in? If i follow the logic here, if Canada et Jamaïca fall, it's no big deal. But if Turkey falls, and I have nothing against Turkey, all other countries will fall too. I don't want to get all geopolitical on you here, but this is the kind of stuff you really have to think through if you involve flags and governments in an ad.

Plus the claim of "one wrong move and everything goes to shit" doesn't hold any water if it's not backed up by facts.

Ho, and it' looks like you put the Canadian flag twice. =)

No one cares about child labor, eye donation or saving the Earth: NO PSA!!! http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/135094

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jteslikSunday, May 20, 2012 - 00:20

"Sorry to be the party pooper, but I'm not a fan of the idea. I watch this ad and nothing tells me it's about the implementation of bla bla bla... I had to read your explanation to get it."

^This. I could care less what order the countries are in, but you need to make it more clear what exactly your brand is trying to say here.

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andresmendezmFriday, June 1, 2012 - 02:39

Shawali thanks for your comments.
of course I thought about the order I put the flags, The idea was not to make a key item of this so I put them so mixed. But it's fine.

Thank you again for all the bad words, specially if they came from a genius or something.

and no, the canadian flag is not twice, i think you're seeing the Peruvian flag.

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MindDriftMonday, May 21, 2012 - 06:03

I think the idea is solid. I would replace 'movement' with 'move' though.

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mmackinvenWednesday, May 30, 2012 - 21:45

New Zealand is screwed...

www.creativeduck.blogspot.com

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andresmendezmFriday, June 1, 2012 - 02:35

Thanks for your comments... I really apreciate you take your time to see my work...
I will take your advices for the future.

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