very silly work. Do you want to say that by putting MOOV, if someone harms you, nothing will happen to you? Is that the brief,. I won't believe if that was the brief.
It is like saying screw me, I am safe with MOOV.
However I agree with the above commenter - I was a little confused as to whether the things were massaging her or if they represent the pain that MOOV will relieve. For example, in the elephant one, it's hard to tell if she's feeling pain or pleasure, and I think mini soldiers marching across my back could feel quite good at times.
I think the solution lies in the execution...use a model who looks like she's trying to sleep (not laying on a massage table). The things on her back should be more explicitly uncomfortable/painful. This is a decent start though, and excellent job campaigning your idea into multiple executions. Good luck.
I don't know what you and others are feeling about this visual. But the purpose of the visual is (the elephants) how you feel when you are having pain some where in your body.
I don't think the concept is good enough. It will be a good concept for a vaccine but not for a medicine. The message table creating the effect that she is enjoying the massage.
But not a vaccine. And if u r so confident, as per ur comments, that it's a good job and u don't want to take the suggestions then why did u post it here in forum? I think u don't need to post something in AOTW forum to show off ur skills, the archive is there for it and above all all the social network sites r there. I think this forum is for educational purpose only. If already have ur cup full then no need to come here and wasting the time used evaluating ur work.
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NIce work
Princes
that was a nice comment...
does the soldiers,vehicles and the elephants represent pain or they are massaging her...?
Hmmm..... Your first guess was right...jagadeesh
Why don't you experience that kind of massage once?
Princes
very silly work. Do you want to say that by putting MOOV, if someone harms you, nothing will happen to you? Is that the brief,. I won't believe if that was the brief.
It is like saying screw me, I am safe with MOOV.
Ha Ha Ha........
Ya you are right........
Its really silly....
manumartin5 are you a Marketing Guy? :) :) :)
Princes
..no I am an Art guy.. in an ad agency.
Nice idea!
However I agree with the above commenter - I was a little confused as to whether the things were massaging her or if they represent the pain that MOOV will relieve. For example, in the elephant one, it's hard to tell if she's feeling pain or pleasure, and I think mini soldiers marching across my back could feel quite good at times.
I think the solution lies in the execution...use a model who looks like she's trying to sleep (not laying on a massage table). The things on her back should be more explicitly uncomfortable/painful. This is a decent start though, and excellent job campaigning your idea into multiple executions. Good luck.
Thanks you.
HappyHour
Princes
"mini soldiers marching across my back could feel quite good at times"
I wonder what Freud might say of this :)
HA HA HA.........
First you arrange only one mini soldier (a baby) and tel him to march across your back... :)
Princes
second that, happyhour. the facial expression is misleading.
apart from that i really like it
I think it's very interesting, but the execution needs more work.
Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW
True
Princes
I have noooooo clue what Moov is about. Make sure you punch it with a headline or tagline. It's begging for it.
OK,
Thanks
Princes
Moov is something like Tiger balm.. it helps relieve joint and muscle pains.
can't get it
Princes
Ya you are right
Princes
Please comment on it so that ............ I will do it better :)
Princes
Elephant Girl is laughing :P
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tausif
NO. She is crying in a different style :0
Princes
in first two pics she closed her eyes.
but, in third one(Elephant grl)...shez laughing :P
u from india na.??
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tausif
Ya, I am an Indian. How obvious is this tausif .
I don't know what you and others are feeling about this visual. But the purpose of the visual is (the elephants) how you feel when you are having pain some where in your body.
Princes
its really a good concept and thought.!!
i liked it. :)
R u a professional ad-maker.??
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tausif
Ya a little bit. I am from a small village working as a visualiser some where in a local ad agency
Princes
hmm... :)
good.!
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tausif
Thank You tausif .
Princes
:)
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tausif
I don't think the concept is good enough. It will be a good concept for a vaccine but not for a medicine. The message table creating the effect that she is enjoying the massage.
Ok................ No problem.
What ever you feel.
End of all its a Pain Relief Balm... :)
Princes
But not a vaccine. And if u r so confident, as per ur comments, that it's a good job and u don't want to take the suggestions then why did u post it here in forum? I think u don't need to post something in AOTW forum to show off ur skills, the archive is there for it and above all all the social network sites r there. I think this forum is for educational purpose only. If already have ur cup full then no need to come here and wasting the time used evaluating ur work.
really?
Princes
oh oh oh Calm down
I was only joking. It was not to hurt you...
You are getting so serious.
I thing you didn’t get the point of my reply.
Sorry
Princes
nice art
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